Scamper

 

It started with a scratch.

A faint skittering behind the walls of the old houses lining Elmwood Street. Too soft for adults to notice, but the kids heard it. Every day at dusk, just as the sun slipped low and the shadows got long.

They called it Scamper.

No one remembered who came up with the rules. When the scratching started, you had to run. Hide. Stay completely still. If Scamper found you, you were “out.” Last one hiding won. They played in basements, under porches, between hedges, giggling breathlessly until the sound faded.

It was just a game.

Until Georgia vanished.

She’d hidden in her closet during a round. The others waited for her to jump out, grinning, but she never did. Her flashlight was still on the floor, beaming across an empty space. No footprints. No signs. Just the scratch-scratch-scratch in the walls, closer than ever.

After that, no one played Scamper.

The scratching still comes at dusk, now louder and quicker, circling the empty houses. Waiting.

And sometimes, if you’re very quiet near Georgia’s old porch, you’ll hear a whisper under the noise.

"Come out, come out… I’m still hiding."



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193 words

Another fairly short one that I think I could expand, but honestly now I just want to combine this with Knobbles and create some creepy haunted house collection.

Comments

  1. The last line had chills running up my neck and into my scalp. Poor Georgia! So many disappearing people in your stories. A missing person is always disturbing.

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    1. Yes I always get sucked into rabbit holes with missing people when they're never found. And trying to disappear/live off grid. I blame Richey from Manic Street Preachers for starting me with this obsession haha.

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  2. Like Lisa, I got got chills with this one. And I'm pretty sure I'm glad I read this during the day and not late at night.

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    1. Haha well I'm glad you read it at an appropriate time!

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  3. OOOH. That one was spooky! @samanthabwriter from
    Balancing Act

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  4. Well, I'd have been the wet blanket kid who didn't want to play this game even at the beginning. Too scary for me even before poor Georgia disappeared!

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    1. I think I would have reacted the same way! My cousins were always trying to rope us into games that would get us in trouble and I usually tried to beg off without looking lame... but failed, ha.

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